bold writing – Page 2 – Peaceful Reader

My friend, Tina, from books are my thing, made me check this book out last week from our local library. She said, “Even though the cover is very unattractive, the story is great,” and it was!! Funny thing...at one point, during my reading, I made a mental note that the dialogue was a not that good..then, when I got to the end, I had a huge “aha” moment, which I will not share because I don’t want to be a spoiler!!

The story centers around Joan, who has just moved to a suburb of San Fransisco from Connecticut, with her family. Joan is sent out to “explore the neighborhood” one day while her mom is unpacking stuff and she meets a neighbor girl unlike any other. Her new friend goes by the name of Fox and appears to live in the forest area between Joan’s house and the rest of the world. Fox (aka Sarah) lives with her wise single father, Gus, who is a writer (and a tattooed motorcycle rider.) Joan’s father, on the other hand, is bitter and angry and takes it out on his family with sarcastic comments. Neither family situation is perfect, however, for Fox misses the mother who left her when she was seven.

Luckily, Fox and Joan end up in the same class and, toward the end of the year, enter a story-writing contest together, with one story they have created about “wild girls”. The girls’ story wins and they are invited to become part of a special writer’s workshop taught by a unique teacher, Verla Volante, at Berkeley. This opens up a whole new world for Sarah and Joan as they trek each week into the wild city and meet a bunch of “loose nuts” that help them understand their own unique qualities. This book is a wonderful romp with a great cast of characters, and lots of story-telling tips along the way!!
Pat Murphy’s website
Tina’s review
Sarah Laurence’s review
love the cover art on her copy-why did they change it????

I’d never heard of this author before and now I want to race back to the library and get one of her older titles. Black Box is a book about a family in crisis-real crisis not our everyday-to-much-going-on crisis). Dora is the very troubled sister and Elena, the narrator, is the stable sister, the one trying to hold it altogether. Julie Schumacher does an amazing job of creating realistic characters. There is only mom, dad, Dora, Elena and Jimmy Zenk, a teen-age neighbor, to focus on and the author weaves the story tightly around these characters. There is no fluff, no extra dialogue…not one sentence that shouldn’t be there. The opening of the book has Dora locked away at the local hospital psych ward, screaming her head off after an overdose. The rest of the family spirals around this change in daily routine as if they are looking for ruby slippers. Elena especially is left confused by her sister’s betrayal and truly feels she is the one that must save Dora. Elena just wants the life they had before; before Dora decided to be crazy. The sisters do have a special bond, which Dora, in her depression, uses to her advantage, creating more confusion for Elena. Jimmy’s odd friendship ultimately brings truth to the family and to Elena. I reread the last chapter over and over when I was finished: (little excerpt)

“I needed to be closer to the ground…..
I dropped to my knees. Cars drove past in both directions. I thought about what the Grandma Therapist had told me. ‘You learn to carry it with you. But sometimes, in the presence of a person you trust’– ‘I was supposed to save her, Jimmy,’ I said. ‘She asked me to save her.’
The traffice streamed by on either side of us. ‘I’m right here with you,’ Jimmy said. ” p. 164

This is not meant to be a spoiler but a tease and of course, the reason why all this makes such sense to me and why I will carry these lines around with me for awhile is because the rest of the book makes it all fit together so perfectly! You’ll have to read it now. Another reader who enjoyed this book as well.

Tag: bold writing

The Wild Girls by Pat Murphy

Black Box by Julie Schumacher